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Nocturnal

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I wanted to make some beautiful but dark at the same time.
She is enjoying nighttime. The only time this vampire lady can come out.

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Model [link]
Background [link]
Roof [link]

Moon, bats, clouds are all mine

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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Hi! so it is time for me to take a time and check your progress, sorry I had taken a long while to come around to give you critics and stuff, to begin I want you to know that I will direct the critic mostly to the weak points I am being objective.

so let's begin in this work in specific I am not too impress, I think that you have high expectation when it comes to creativity, but analyzing not just the cohesive relationship between the elements but the resources usage to give life to the composition, I didn't see much blending in this piece of work, the background was already sort of a pre-made background, and that's the problem of using pre-made backgrounds that the photo manipulator loses focus on what his function on their art truly is, photo composition...

I have seen works from you that are really high on blending techniques, I want you to explore more your skills capabilities because I know you can do better than this. You have a great sense when it comes on matching the color palette because I am really happy with the way you integrated the model into the whole subject, but I feel that you are keeping yourself in a safe zone, explore with stocks, and please don't use more pre-made backgrounds, you can make your owns with different resources...

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